The point of view in "The Sheriff's Children" shifts several times. At the beginning of the story, the tale is told from an omniscient point of view; the narrator's voice is that of an editorial commentator, someone who understands the county, its history, and its inhabitants. Early on, the narrator is even self-referential: "At the period of which I write, no railroad had come to Troy." The omniscient point of view is maintained through the first two-thirds of the story. The narrator makes decisions of what details to include and which are "immaterial to this narrative."