What is the author's tone in the novel, The Children’s Crusade?

The language of this novel is fairly straightforward with a relaxed tone. One specific use of words that impacts the reader is the way that Penny is generally referred to by her first name, while Bill is referred to as the father of the children. This use of words helps to bring the reader to the conclusion that Bill is closer to the children than Penny is. By referring to Bill as their father, the author connects Bill to the children by his relationship to them. By not referring to Penny as their mother, the author underscores the distance felt between Penny and her children.

Also significant are the changes in tone and attitude in the four chapters narrated by the adult children. In the sections narrated by Robert the reader can feel his frustration and anger. “I snapped, I growled, I sank into silence. The boys fought over which of them had caused my bad moods” (64). Rebecca’s show her expertise in psychology. She interprets dreams and provides explanations for behaviors. Ryan’s chapter of the novel is full of references to love, particularly his love for his daughter. James’ section is written in a more laid back attitude than the other sections. He uses slang and foul language. “I was born with my mouth full of shit” (367). He also refers to his boss as an “asshole” (371).