What is the author's style in the novel, Miss Benson’s Beetle?

The language of the novel is informal and easy to understand. The narrator uses short, simple, poignant sentences to describe whatever is going on. In general, Margery speaks more stiffly and formally whereas Enid tends to use more slang and speak more freely. This directly relates to each of the women’s personalities.

Language plays a key role in the novel. The narrator’s use of language is unique to each character which the narrator follows. For instance, with Margery the narrator starts out with using bleak metaphors and similes to describe what Margery sees. However, as the novel progresses and Margery’s outlook changes for the better, the narrator begins to use more positive language. The narrator starts to pick up on little details and describes their beauty in length, illustrating Margery’s gratitude and shift in priorities. On the other hand, the narrator uses more violent language in the chapters focusing on Mundic. This makes sense, considering that Mundic was a prisoner of war. As for the few chapters surrounding Mrs Pope, the narrator adopts a distant, impersonal tone—much like Mrs Pope herself.

One thing remains clear throughout the novel. Joyce keeps her young adult audience in mind. She focuses on creating an interesting and layered plot, rather than on describing the themes of the novel in depth. This means that the reader can dedicate all their attention on Enid and Margery’s connection and journey. This, in turn, creates a memorable, moving reading experience.