work. The poet is perpetually singling out the
difficulties of the art to make an exhibition of his
strength and skill in wrestling with them. He
is making perpetual trials of them as if his mastery
over them were doubted. The images, which are
often striking, are generally applied to things which
they are the least like: so that they do not
blend with the poem, but seem stuck upon it, like
splendid patchwork, or remain quite distinct from it,
like detached substances, painted and varnished over.
A beautiful thought is sure to be lost in an endless
commentary upon it. The speakers are like persons
who have both leisure and inclination to make riddles
on their own situation, and to twist and turn every
object or incident into acrostics and anagrams.
Everything is spun out into allegory; and a digression
is always preferred to the main story. Sentiment
is built up upon plays of words; the hero or heroine
feels, not from the impulse of passion, but from the
force of dialectics. There is besides, a strange
attempt to substitute the language of painting for
that of poetry, to make us
see their feelings
in the faces of the persons; and again, consistently
with this, in the description of the picture in
Tarquin
and LUCRECE, those circumstances are chiefly
insisted on, which it would be impossible to convey
except by words. The invocation to Opportunity
in the
Tarquin and LUCRECE is full of thoughts
and images, but at the same time it is overloaded
by them. The concluding stanza expresses all
our objections to this kind of poetry:
Oh! idle words, servants
to shallow fools;
Unprofitable sounds,
weak arbitrators;
Busy yourselves in skill-contending
schools;
Debate when leisure
serves with dull debaters;
To trembling clients
be their mediators:
For me I force not argument
a straw,
Since that my case is
past all help of law.
The description of the horse in Venus and
Adonis has been particularly admired, and not
without reason:
Round-hoof’d,
short-jointed, fetlocks shag and long,
Broad breast, full eyes,
small head, and nostril wide,
High crest, short ears,
straight legs, and passing strong,
Thin mane, thick tail,
broad buttock, tender hide:
Look, what
a horse should have he did not lack,
Save a proud
rider on so proud a back.
Now this inventory of perfections shows great knowledge
of the horse; and is good matter-of-fact poetry.
Let the reader but compare it with a speech in the
midsummer night’s dream where
Theseus describes his hounds—
And their
heads are hung
With ears that sweep
away the morning dew—
and he will perceive at once what we mean by the difference
between Shakespeare’s own poetry, and that of
his plays. We prefer the passionate Pilgrim
very much to the lover’s complaint.
It has been doubted whether the latter poem is Shakespeare’s.