Faerie Queene, Chaucer and his successors—the
Scottish poets of the 15th and 16th Centuries, The
Morte d’Arthur, the authorised version of the
Bible and North’s Plutarch have always lain
at his elbow. Then, too, with Dante, Shakespeare
and Heine’s poems he is supersaturated; but
the authorised version of the Bible has had more influence
on him than any other book, and he has so loved and
studied it from boyhood that he had assimilated its
processes and learned the secrets of the interior mechanism
of its style. It is not surprising that his
first publication should have been a book of poetry.
The merits of The Masque of Shadows and other Poems
were acknowledged on all sides. It was seen that
the art of ballad writing—which Goethe
calls the most difficult of arts—was not,
as some averred, a forgotten one. The Masque
of Shadows itself is melodious and vivid from the
first line to the end, but the captain jewel is the
necromantic and thrilling Rime of Redemption—the
story of a woman who erred and of a man who prayed
and wrestled with God in prayer for her, and ultimately
wrung her salvation by self-sacrifice from Divine
Justice. Here and there are passages that we
could have wished modified, but surely such a terrific
fantasy was never before penned! It is as harrowing
as The Ancient Mariner, and appeals to one more forcibly
than Coleridge’s “Rime,” because
it seems actual truth. Other volumes, containing
impassioned ballads, lyrics, narrative poems and sonnets,
came from Mr. Payne’s pen. His poems have
the rush and bound of a Scotch waterfall. This
is explained by the fact that they are written in
moments of physical and mental exaltation. Only
a mind in a quasi-delirious state, to be likened to
that of the pythoness on the tripod, could have evolved
the Rime of Redemption[FN#345] or Thorgerda[FN#346].
No subject comes amiss to him. His chemic power
turns everything to gold. “He sees everything,”
as Mr. Watts-Dunton once said to the writer—“through
the gauze of poetry.” His love for beautiful
words and phrases leads him to express his thoughts
in the choicest language. He puts his costliest
wine in myrrhine vases; he builds his temple with the
lordliest cedars. Mr. Payne does not write for
the multitude, but few poets of the day have a more
devoted band of admirers. Some readers will express
a preference for The Building of the Dream,[FN#347]
others for Lautrec[FN#348] or Salvestra[FN#349], and
others for the dazzling and mellifluous Prelude to
Hafiz. Mr. A. C. Swinburne eulogised the “exquisite
and clear cut Intaglios."[FN#350] D. G. Rossetti
revelled in the Sonnets; Theodore de Banville, “roi
des rimes,” in the Songs of Life and Death,
whose beauties blend like the tints in jewels.[FN#351]