say what you must.” I was thinking more
especially of rhymed verse. Rhythm alone is a
tether, and not a very long one. But rhymes are
iron fetters; it is dragging a chain and ball to march
under their incumbrance; it is a clog-dance you are
figuring in, when you execute your metrical pas seul.
Consider under what a disadvantage your thinking powers
are laboring when you are handicapped by the inexorable
demands of our scanty English rhyming vocabulary!
You want to say something about the heavenly bodies,
and you have a beautiful line ending with the word
stars. Were you writing in prose, your imagination,
your fancy, your rhetoric, your musical ear for the
harmonies of language, would all have full play.
But there is your rhyme fastening you by the leg,
and you must either reject the line which pleases
you, or you must whip your hobbling fancy and all your
limping thoughts into the traces which are hitched
to one of three or four or half a dozen serviceable
words. You cannot make any use of cars, I will
suppose; you have no occasion to talk about scars;
“the red planet Mars” has been used already;
Dibdin has said enough about the gallant tars; what
is there left for you but bars? So you give up
your trains of thought, capitulate to necessity, and
manage to lug in some kind of allusion, in place or
out of place, which will allow you to make use of
bars. Can there be imagined a more certain process
for breaking up all continuity of thought, for taking
out all the vigor, all the virility, which belongs
to natural prose as the vehicle of strong, graceful,
spontaneous thought, than this miserable subjugation
of intellect to the-clink of well or ill matched syllables?
I think you will smile if I tell you of an idea I
have had about teaching the art of writing “poems”
to the half-witted children at the Idiot Asylum.
The trick of rhyming cannot be more usefully employed
than in furnishing a pleasant amusement to the poor
feeble-minded children. I should feel that I was
well employed in getting up a Primer for the pupils
of the Asylum, and other young persons who are incapable
of serious thought and connected expression.
I would start in the simplest way; thus:—
When darkness veils
the evening....
I love to close my weary....
The pupil begins by supplying the missing words, which
most children who are able to keep out of fire and
water can accomplish after a certain number of trials.
When the poet that is to be has got so as to perform
this task easily, a skeleton verse, in which two or
three words of each line are omitted, is given the
child to fill up. By and by the more difficult
forms of metre are outlined, until at length a feebleminded
child can make out a sonnet, completely equipped with
its four pairs of rhymes in the first section and
its three pairs in the second part.
Number Seven interrupted my discourse somewhat abruptly,
as is his wont; for we grant him a license, in virtue
of his eccentricity, which we should hardly expect
to be claimed by a perfectly sound Teacup.