“IT’S A QUESTION OF ETHICS—”
Bill glowers and snaps:
Cut-in leader—
“ETHICS BE DAMNED!
IT’S A QUESTION OF—ARE YOU GOIN’
TUH
BLAME HER FOR THE VERY
THING YOU MADE HER DO?”
Blinker begins to consider.
148—Ella’s room.
Florence dressing (suspense:
Does she recall that revolver
and want to add her
tragedy to the dreary ones of “Brickdust
Row?”)
149—Blinker’s apartment.
Big realization—“All my fault.” Blinker goes off with Bill.
150—Ella’s room.
Ella soothing Florence.
Latter does not wish to live. All
life is black before
her.
151—Hall outside door.
Comedy relief as Bill and Blinker come on and latter draws back in a natural suspense as to his reception and Bill tells him to “beat it on in!” Blinker knocks, and goes in. Bill pauses.
152—Ella’s room.
Florence looks up.
Ella surprised. Blinker pauses. Ella
seems to be attracted
by something.
153—Crack of open door.
Bill is making violent gestures to get Ella out.
154—Ella’s room.
Ella catches Bill’s
idea, and moves unostentatiously out.
Then Blinker strides
to Florence. He says:
Cut-in leader—
“IT’S ALL WRONG. I’VE COME TO SQUARE IT.”
Florence is reserved, chilly, as she says:
Cut-in leader—
“YOU MEAN—ABOUT THE PARLORS?”
Blinker is beside her, and catching her hands he cries:
Cut-in leader—
“I MEAN—ABOUT YOU!—AND ME!”
In spite of herself, Florence is forced to lift her eyes, and as she reads the look in his own she is compelled to realize that the air is cleared at last and that the happiness that seemed dead is again alive—palpitant happiness that draws her into his ready arms.
155—Hall outside Ella’s room.
Bill “fixes it
up” with Ella to “travel double.”
She wants
to rush in and tell
her chum, but Bill stays her: “Nix—let
’em do some clinchin’
first!”
156—Ella’s room.
Florence and Blinker embracing.
Circle diaphragm closes to blackness.[60]
[Footnote 60: This is the script before it reached production. If you see the picture you will no doubt observe directorial alterations that came up during production. In that case you will have valuable experience in seeing the difference between the original—the script-writer’s conception—and the directorial interpretation.]
CHAPTER XXI
MARKETING THE PHOTOPLAY SCRIPT