Writing the Photoplay eBook

This eBook from the Gutenberg Project consists of approximately 385 pages of information about Writing the Photoplay.

Writing the Photoplay eBook

This eBook from the Gutenberg Project consists of approximately 385 pages of information about Writing the Photoplay.

125—­Another boat.

     Crowd more orderly.  Women being helped into boat.  Blinker
     on with Florence.  Takes her to boat.

126—­Boat davits.

     Sailors shot at by officer.  Surge away and off.

127—­Fire blazing.  Sailors lose heads—­dash back from fire and toward—­

128—­Other boat.

     Fire coming.  Florence by boat.  Sailors rush on and fight. 
     Get officer’s gun.  Surround Florence and Blinker.

129—­Different angle.

     Blinker fighting to save Florence.

130—­Different view.

     Fire coming on.  Bill fighting way toward Blinker and
     Florence.

131—­Other boat.

Blinker fighting.  Florence separated from him.  Bill fights way to his side.  They notice one another as men with same idea—­join back to back.  Florence forced away.  They try to get to her.  Surge of sailors over-runs them.[57]

[Footnote 57:  Necessary departure from O. Henry, to build up Blinker’s good qualities, and achieve a preparation for new finish.]

132—­Deck rail.

     Florence staggers on.  Flames coming.  Great God!  What shall
     she do?  Off she races.

133—­Boat davits.

     Flames leaping.  Florence just in time to see boat lowered
     away.  Too late.  Driven back.

134—­Other boat.

     Bill and Blinker together.  Several sailors done for, others
     lower boat and go.  Men peer about, but smoke too thick for
     them to see.

135—­Rail.

     Florence in terror.  Sudden blast of flame.  On rail.  Leaps.

     Diaphragm out.[58]

     Diaphragm in: 

[Footnote 58:  Purposely uncompleted to give suspense strength to hold over into next—­slowing—­episode.]

136—­Blinker’s apartment.

     Man caring for Blinker, somewhat burned.  Sad and downcast. 
     Man admits Oldport.  Lawyer listens to story.

137—­Hospital entry.

     Bill comes out, discharged—­head bandaged.  He takes a card
     out of pocket—­looks and puts back.  He does not know what to
     do, then decides, and goes off.[59]

[Footnote 59:  Observe how girl’s fate is withheld till disposition of less important characters is shown.]

138—­Ella’s room.

     Florence in bed.  Ella attending.  Bill knocks, is admitted.

139—­Blinker’s apartment.

     Oldport sees Blinker is able to talk business.  He assumes
     quizzical air, says: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “MAYBE I CAN KEEP YOU HERE LONG ENOUGH TO TAKE UP THAT
     DEFERRED MATTER—­”

     Blinker wearily assents.  Oldport begins: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “YOUR FATHER INTENDED THAT THE PARLORS OF CERTAIN BUILDINGS
     SHOULD BE USED BY THE GIRL-TENANTS AS PLACES WHEREIN TO
     ENTERTAIN THEIR MALE CALLERS.”

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