Writing the Photoplay eBook

This eBook from the Gutenberg Project consists of approximately 385 pages of information about Writing the Photoplay.

Writing the Photoplay eBook

This eBook from the Gutenberg Project consists of approximately 385 pages of information about Writing the Photoplay.

     “WHY, THE MEN I MEET.”

     What is he driving at?

113—­Both—­in wider view.

     Florence wondering.  He changes expression.  Growing tension. 
     Asks her: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “WHERE DO YOU MEET—­THESE MEN?”

     She looks wide-eyed—­surprised—­answers: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “I MEET THEM—­AS I DID YOU—­”

     Blinker aghast.  Asks: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “DO YOU KNOW SO MANY?”

     She allows herself a laugh—­says: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “WELL I’M NOT EXACTLY A WALL FLOWER.”

     He turns away.

114—­Close-up of Blinker.

     Growing tension—­it is sinking in, and finally his
     expression grows harder.

115—­Close-up of Florence.

     She wonders—­finally asks: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “WHAT’S WRONG?”

     Her lips part in amazed terror.

116—­New angle.  Close-up of Blinker.

     Swings upon her and cries: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “EVERYTHING’S WRONG!  WHY DON’T YOU SEE THESE—­THESE MEN—­AT
     YOUR HOME?  IS IT NECESSARY TO MEET EVERY TOM, DICK AND
     HARRY—­OUTSIDE?”

     He is growing furious.  So that is the sort she is!

117—­Profile close-up of Florence.

     She laughs.  Her voice is brassy-hard, saying: 

Cut-in leader—­

     “IF YOU COULD SEE ‘BRICKDUST ROW’ YOU WOULDN’T ASK THAT.  THE
     FELLOW WHO OWNS IT DOESN’T GIVE US ANY PLACE TO RECEIVE—­AND
     WE CAN’T TAKE FELLOWS TO OUR ROOM—­SO—­”

     Shrugs.

118—­Wider-angle view, with Blinker nearest camera.

     Tension.  Big scene as he gets over his horror and disgust
     and she realizes it, and rising, disillusioned—­exactly as
     he feels that he is disillusioned about her—­Sudden pause—­

119—­Deck, ad lib.

     Fire!  Excitement.  “Where?”—­“What’ll we do?"[56]

[Footnote 56:  Sketchy, as this sort of material has to depend on boat, crowd, director, etc.  Continuity only required.]

120—­Deck, another part.

     Panic.  Woman screams.

121—­Walking beam.

     Excited scattering of crowd.  Florence turning away—­Bill
     coming forward—­Blinker listening.  He grabs Florence by arm. 
     She draws away.  He compels her to go.

122—­Deck.

     Tension.  Wild scene.

123—­Walking beam.

     Bill follows, crowd intervening, as Blinker takes Florence
     off.  Bill gets after them.

124—­Boat davits.

     Wild scene.  Officer.  Sailors.  Fire and smoke.  Blinker with
     Florence.  Takes her away—­another boat!

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