“WHY, THE MEN I MEET.”
What is he driving at?
113—Both—in wider view.
Florence wondering.
He changes expression. Growing tension.
Asks her:
Cut-in leader—
“WHERE DO YOU MEET—THESE MEN?”
She looks wide-eyed—surprised—answers:
Cut-in leader—
“I MEET THEM—AS I DID YOU—”
Blinker aghast. Asks:
Cut-in leader—
“DO YOU KNOW SO MANY?”
She allows herself a laugh—says:
Cut-in leader—
“WELL I’M NOT EXACTLY A WALL FLOWER.”
He turns away.
114—Close-up of Blinker.
Growing tension—it
is sinking in, and finally his
expression grows harder.
115—Close-up of Florence.
She wonders—finally asks:
Cut-in leader—
“WHAT’S WRONG?”
Her lips part in amazed terror.
116—New angle. Close-up of Blinker.
Swings upon her and cries:
Cut-in leader—
“EVERYTHING’S
WRONG! WHY DON’T YOU SEE THESE—THESE
MEN—AT
YOUR HOME? IS IT
NECESSARY TO MEET EVERY TOM, DICK AND
HARRY—OUTSIDE?”
He is growing furious. So that is the sort she is!
117—Profile close-up of Florence.
She laughs. Her voice is brassy-hard, saying:
Cut-in leader—
“IF YOU COULD
SEE ‘BRICKDUST ROW’ YOU WOULDN’T
ASK THAT. THE
FELLOW WHO OWNS IT DOESN’T
GIVE US ANY PLACE TO RECEIVE—AND
WE CAN’T TAKE
FELLOWS TO OUR ROOM—SO—”
Shrugs.
118—Wider-angle view, with Blinker nearest camera.
Tension. Big scene
as he gets over his horror and disgust
and she realizes it,
and rising, disillusioned—exactly as
he feels that he
is disillusioned about her—Sudden
pause—
119—Deck, ad lib.
Fire! Excitement. “Where?”—“What’ll we do?"[56]
[Footnote 56: Sketchy, as this sort of material has to depend on boat, crowd, director, etc. Continuity only required.]
120—Deck, another part.
Panic. Woman screams.
121—Walking beam.
Excited scattering of
crowd. Florence turning away—Bill
coming forward—Blinker
listening. He grabs Florence by arm.
She draws away.
He compels her to go.
122—Deck.
Tension. Wild scene.
123—Walking beam.
Bill follows, crowd
intervening, as Blinker takes Florence
off. Bill gets
after them.
124—Boat davits.
Wild scene. Officer.
Sailors. Fire and smoke. Blinker with
Florence. Takes
her away—another boat!