11—Lower hall of tenement.
A worn whisk-broom hangs
on wall. There is a comedy touch as
Ella and Florence come
in, and the latter notices the
whisk-broom.
12—Bust view. Wall.
Showing whisk-broom.
13—Wider view of hall.
Ella laughs, and says:
Cut-in leader—
“THE FIRST TIME
YOU START OUT FROM THIS DUST-FACTORY YOU’LL
KNOW WHY THAT’S
THERE!”
Florence is dubious
about liking the place, but follows Ella
up the rickety, dust-laden
stairway.
14—Ella’s tiny but neat room—window on fire-escape.
Ella brings Florence in. Ella throws out hands in gesture of “Here it is—not much, I’ll admit.” Florence exclaims in reassuring affectation of delight and says she will take Ella’s offer.
Diaphragm out.
Leader—
WE NOTE ONE BLINKER—ALEXANDER
BLINKER—OWNING TENEMENTS
GALORE, AND LEADING
A GENERALLY USELESS LIFE BECAUSE HE HAS
BEEN BROUGHT UP THAT
WAY.
15—Oldport’s legal office. Close-up at door.
Diaphragm in to a close
view of Blinker, introducing him in
a very unpleasing humor,
evidently sour about something.[45]
[Footnote 45: We are handling O. Henry’s incident now, and must use his leader-material, so the next situation must be broken into various “close-up” views to prevent having too long a scene and too irksome a run of spoken matter in one scene.]
16—Oldport’s office—wider view.
Showing Oldport looking
quizzically at the fuming Blinker as
the latter advances,
saying:
Cut-in leader—
“IF I MUST
SIGN THOSE DISGUSTING LEASES, LET US GET IT
OVER. I HAVE A
GOLF TOURNAMENT ON—”
He advances and slumps pettishly into a chair by desk.
17—Close-up of Oldport.
Oldport looks around
at Blinker, with an expression showing
more pity than annoyance.
18—Close-up of Blinker.
Blinker makes a gesture
of impatience and shifts in his
chair.
19—Ella’s room. A few touches indicating the refining influence of Florence.
Ella is getting ready
to go out. Florence questions. Ella
says, “I got an
afternoon date.” Then she vents her
annoyance at the owner
of the buildings by saying:
Cut-in-leader—
“THE DUB THAT
OWNS THIS DUST-BIN IS SO MEAN THAT HE RENTS
THE PARLORS—SO
US GIRLS HAS GOT TO MEET OUR GENTLEMEN
FRIENDS SOMEWHERE OUTSIDE—WE
CAN’T ENTERTAIN IN OUR ROOMS,
CAN WE?”
Florence shakes her
head, and refuses an invitation to
accompany Ella, who
goes out.[46]
[Footnote 46: Contrast to Blinker; also forecasts by association of ideas the coming together of characters; hints at plot.]