“Wise were the Augurers of old,
nor erred
In substance, deeming that
the life of man—
(This is a new reflection,
spick and span)—
May be much influenced by the flight of
birds.
Our senate can no longer hold
their house
When culminates the evil star
of grouse;
And stoutest patriots will their shot-belts
gird
When first o’er stubble-field hath
partridge whirred.”—p.25.
In these others there is more purpose, with a no less definite conciseness:
“Comes forth the first great poet.
Then a number
Of followers leave much literary lumber.
He cuts his phrases in the sapling grain
Of language; and so weaves
them at his will.
They from his wickerwork extract with
pain
The wands now warped and stiffened,
which but ill
Bend to their second-hand employment.”—pp.
4, 5.
“What’s life?
A riddle;
Or sieve which sifts you thro’ it
in the middle.”—p.45.
The misadventures of the five friends on their road to Nornyth are very sufficiently described:
“The night was cold and cloudy as
they topped
A moorland slope, and met
the bitter blast,
So cutting that their ears it almost cropped;
And rain began to fall extremely
fast.
A broken sign-post left them in great
doubt
About two roads; and, when
an hour was passed,
They learned their error from a lucid
lout;
Soon after, one by one, their lamps went
out.”—p.29.
There remains to point out one fault,—and that the last fault the occurrence of which could be looked for, after so clearly expressed an intention as this:
“But, if an Author takes to writing
fine,
(Which means, I think, an
artificial tone),
The public sicken and won’t read
a line.
I hope there’s nothing of this sort
in mine.”—p. 6.
A quotation or two will fully explain our meaning: and we would seriously ask Mr. Cayley to reflect whether he has always borne his principle in mind, and avoided “writing fine;” whether he has not sometimes fallen into high-flown common-place of the most undisguised stamp, rendered, moreover, doubly inexcusable and out of place by being put into the mouth of one of the personages of the poem; It is Sir Reginald Mohun that speaks; and truly, though not thrust forward as a “wondrous paragon of praise,” he must be confessed to be,
“Judging by specimens the author
quotes,
An utterer of most ordinary phrases,”
not words only and sentences, but real phrases, in the more distinct and specific sense of the term.
“’There,
while yet a new born thing,
Death o’er my cradle
waved his darksome wing;
My mother died to give me birth:
forlorn
I came into the world, a babe
of woe,
Ill-omened from my childhood’s early
morn;
Yet heir to what the idolators
of show
Deem life’s good things,
which earthly bliss bestow.