want of ’learning,’—that is,
of familiarity with the great writers of antiquity.
But nine-tenths of his defects are not, I believe,
the errors of an inspired genius, ignorant of art,
but the sins of a great but negligent artist.
He was often, no doubt, over-worked and pressed for
time. He knew that the immense majority of his
audience were incapable of distinguishing between
rough and finished work. He often felt the degradation
of having to live by pleasing them. Probably in
hours of depression he was quite indifferent to fame,
and perhaps in another mood the whole business of
play-writing seemed to him a little thing. None
of these thoughts and feelings influenced him when
his subject had caught hold of him. To imagine
that then he ‘winged his roving flight’
for ‘gain’ or ‘glory,’ or
wrote from any cause on earth but the necessity of
expression, with all its pains and raptures, is mere
folly. He was possessed: his mind must have
been in a white heat: he worked, no doubt, with
the furia of Michael Angelo. And if he
did not succeed at once—and how can even
he have always done so?—he returned to the
matter again and again. Such things as the scenes
of Duncan’s murder or Othello’s temptation,
such speeches as those of the Duke to Claudio and
of Claudio to his sister about death, were not composed
in an hour and tossed aside; and if they have defects,
they have not what Shakespeare thought defects.
Nor is it possible that his astonishingly individual
conceptions of character can have been struck out at
a heat: prolonged and repeated thought must have
gone to them. But of small inconsistencies in
the plot he was often quite careless. He seems
to have finished off some of his comedies with a hasty
and even contemptuous indifference, as if it mattered
nothing how the people got married, or even who married
whom, so long as enough were married somehow.
And often, when he came to parts of his scheme that
were necessary but not interesting to him, he wrote
with a slack hand, like a craftsman of genius who
knows that his natural gift and acquired skill will
turn out something more than good enough for his audience:
wrote probably fluently but certainly negligently,
sometimes only half saying what he meant, and sometimes
saying the opposite, and now and then, when passion
was required, lapsing into bombast because he knew
he must heighten his style but would not take the
trouble to inflame his imagination. It may truly
be said that what injures such passages is not inspiration,
but the want of it. But, as they are mostly passages
where no poet could expect to be inspired, it is even
more true to say that here Shakespeare lacked the
conscience of the artist who is determined to make
everything as good as he can. Such poets as Milton,
Pope, Tennyson, habitually show this conscience.
They left probably scarcely anything that they felt
they could improve. No one could dream of saying
that of Shakespeare.