“Will you forward
the letter to Mr. Gilford with the proof? There
is an alteration I may
make in Zuleika’s speech, in second Canto
(the only one of hers
in that Canto). It is now thus:
“And curse, if I could curse, the day.
It must be—
“And
mourn—I dare not curse—the day
That
saw my solitary birth, &c. &c.
“Ever yours, B.
“In the last MS.
lines sent, instead of ‘living heart,’
convert to
‘quivering heart.’
It is in line ninth of the MS. passage.
“Ever yours again, B.”
* * * * *
TO MR. MURRAY.
“Alteration of a line in Canto second.
“Instead of—
“And tints to-morrow with a fancied ray,
Print—
“And tints to-morrow with prophetic ray.
“The evening beam that
smiles the clouds away
And tints to-morrow with prophetic ray;
Or,
{_gilds_}
“And
{ tints } the hope of morning with its ray;
Or,
“And gilds to-morrow’s hope with heavenly ray.
“I wish you would ask Mr.
Gifford which of them is best, or rather
not worst. Ever, &c.
“You can send the request
contained in this at the same time with
the revise, after I have seen the
said revise.”
* * * * *
TO MR. MURRAY.
“Nov. 13. 1813.
“Certainly. Do you suppose that no one but the Galileans are acquainted with Adam, and Eve, and Cain[109], and Noah?—Surely, I might have had Solomon, and Abraham, and David, and even Moses. When you know that Zuleika is the Persian poetical name for Potiphar’s wife, on whom and Joseph there is a long poem, in the Persian, this will not surprise you. If you want authority, look at Jones, D’Herbelot, Vathek, or the notes to the Arabian Nights; and, if you think it necessary, model this into a note.
“Alter, in the
inscription, ‘the most affectionate respect,’
to
‘with every sentiment
of regard and respect.’”
[Footnote 109: Some doubt had been expressed by Mr. Murray as to the propriety of his putting the name of Cain into the mouth of a Mussulman.]
* * * * *
TO MR. MURRAY.
“Nov. 14. 1813.
“I send you a note for the ignorant, but I really wonder at finding you among them. I don’t care one lump of sugar for my poetry; but for my costume and my correctness on those points (of which I think the funeral was a proof), I will combat lustily.
“Yours,” &c.
* * * * *
“Nov. 14. 1813.