It is obvious that Luis de Leon took a keen interest in all the real essentials of his art. It is no less obvious that he saw matters in their actual perspective, that he attached no undue importance to technique, as such, and that he gave no less weight to the choice of matter than to the choice of form. Luis de Leon was not incapable of metrical audacities: as when he divides into two separate words adverbs in _-mente_ occurring at the end of a line. This practice was audacious, but it was not an innovation. Juan de Almeida defended it by citing a host of precedents from other literatures and, had Almeida been a prophet, he might have foretold that this device was destined to be repeated hundreds of years later by that innovating genius Ruben Dario. But Almeida was not a prophet. His titles to remembrance are that he was learned, and that he may rank with Miguel Sanchez, with Alonso de Espinosa, and with Benito Arias Montano as among the least unsuccessful of Luis de Leon’s followers. They often follow his lead with undeniable adroitness. Yet they never attain his incomparable concentration, his majestic vision of nature and his characteristic note of ecstatic aloofness. Nowhere is he more himself than in the immortal stanzas dedicated to Oloarte under the title of Noche serena of which Churton has bequeathed us an English version which I will quote, though it gives but a far-off echo of the original’s magic melody:
When
nightly through the sky
I view the stars their files
unnumber’d leading,
Then
see the dark earth lie
In
deathlike trance, unheeding
How Life and Time with those
bright orbs are speeding:
Strong
love and equal pain
Wake in my heart a fire with
anguish burning;
The
tear-drops fall like rain,
Mine
eyes to fountains turning,
And my sad voice pours forth
its tones of mourning:
O
mansion of high state,
Bright temple of bright saints
in beauty dwelling,
The
soul, once born to mate
With
these, what force repelling
Hath bound to earth, its light
in darkness quelling?