As an example of Sir Charles Bowen’s method we would take his rendering of the famous passage in the fifth Eclogue on the death of Daphnis:
All of the nymphs went weeping for
Daphnis cruelly slain:
Ye were witnesses, hazels and river
waves, of the pain
When to her son’s sad body
the mother clave with a cry,
Calling the great gods cruel, and
cruel the stars of the sky.
None upon those dark days their
pastured oxen did lead,
Daphnis, to drink of the cold clear
rivulet; never a steed
Tasted the flowing waters, or cropped
one blade in the mead.
Over thy grave how the lions of
Carthage roared in despair,
Daphnis, the echoes of mountain
wild and of forest declare.
Daphnis was first who taught us
to guide, with a chariot rein,
Far Armenia’s tigers, the
chorus of Iacchus to train,
Led us with foliage waving the pliant
spear to entwine.
As to the tree her vine is a glory,
her grapes to the vine,
Bull to the horned herd, and the
corn to a fruitful plain,
Thou to thine own wert beauty; and
since fate robbed us of thee,
Pales herself, and Apollo are gone
from meadow and lea.
‘Calling the great gods cruel, and cruel the stars of the sky’ is a very felicitous rendering of ‘Atque deos atque astra vocat crudelia mater,’ and so is ‘Thou to thine own wert beauty’ for ‘Tu decus omne tuis.’ This passage, too, from the fourth book of the AEneid is good:
Now was the night. Tired limbs
upon earth were folded to sleep,
Silent the forests and fierce sea-waves;
in the firmament deep
Midway rolled heaven’s stars;
no sound on the meadow stirred;
Every beast of the field, each bright-hued
feathery bird
Haunting the limpid lakes, or the
tangled briary glade,
Under the silent night in sleep
were peacefully laid:
All but the grieving Queen.
She yields her never to rest,
Takes not the quiet night to her
eyelids or wearied breast.
And this from the sixth book is worth quoting:
’Never again such hopes shall
a youth of the lineage of Troy
Rouse in his great forefathers of
Latium! Never a boy
Nobler pride shall inspire in the
ancient Romulus land!
Ah, for his filial love! for his
old-world faith! for his hand
Matchless in battle! Unharmed
what foemen had offered to stand
Forth in his path, when charging
on foot for the enemy’s ranks
Or when plunging the spur in his
foam-flecked courser’s flanks!
Child of a nation’s sorrow!
if thou canst baffle the Fates’
Bitter decrees, and break for a
while their barrier gates,
Thine to become Marcellus!
I pray thee bring me anon
Handfuls of lilies, that I bright
flowers may strew on my son,
Heap on the shade of the boy unborn
these gifts at the least,
Doing the dead, though vainly, the
last sad service.’
He ceased.