On the whole, Mr. Coleridge has written a really good historical novel and may be congratulated on his success. The style is particularly interesting, and the narrative parts of the book are deserving of high praise for their clearness, dignity and sobriety. The speeches and passages of dialogue are not so fortunate, as they have an awkward tendency to lapse into bad blank verse. Here, for instance, is a speech printed by Mr. Coleridge as prose, in which the true music of prose is sacrificed to a false metrical system which is at once monotonous and tiresome:
But Death, who brings us freedom
from all falsehood,
Who heals the heart when the physician
fails,
Who comforts all whom life cannot
console,
Who stretches out in sleep the tired
watchers;
He takes the King and proves him
but a beggar!
He speaks, and we, deaf to our Maker’s
voice,
Hear and obey the call of our destroyer!
Then let us murmur not at anything;
For if our ills are curable, ’tis
idle,
And if they are past remedy, ’tis
vain.
The worst our strongest enemy can
do
Is take from us our life, and this
indeed
Is in the power of the weakest also.
This is not good prose; it is merely blank verse of an inferior quality, and we hope that Mr. Coleridge in his next novel will not ask us to accept second-rate poetry as musical prose. For, that Mr. Coleridge is a young writer of great ability and culture cannot be doubted and, indeed, in spite of the error we have pointed out, Demetrius remains one of the most fascinating and delightful novels that has appeared this season.