Regarding this legend as “an unhappy foundation for a prose story,” Scott did not complete his fragment, which in style and treatment is not unlike the Gothic experiments of Mrs. Barbauld and Dr. Nathan Drake. Such a story as that of the magic horn and sword might have been told in the simple words that occur naturally to a shepherd, “warmed to courage over his third tumbler,” like the old peasant to whom Stevenson entrusts the terrible tale of Thrawn Janet, or to Wandering Willie, who declared:
“I whiles mak a tale serve the turn among the country bodies, and I have some fearsome anes, that mak the auld carlines shake on the settle, and bits o’ bairns skirl on their minnies out frae their beds.”
The personality of the narrator, swayed by the terror of his tale, would have cast the spell that Scott’s carefully framed sentences fail to create. Another of Scott’s disjecta membra, composed at the end of the eighteenth century, is the opening of a story called The Lord of Ennerdale, in which the family of Ratcliffe settle down before the fire to listen to a story “savouring not a little of the marvellous.” As Lady Ratcliffe and her daughters
“had heard every groan and lifted every trapdoor in company with the noted heroine of Udolpho, had valorously mounted en croupe behind the horseman of Prague through all his seven translators, had followed the footsteps of Moor through the forests of Bohemia,”
and were even suspected of an acquaintance with Lewis’s Monk, Scott was setting himself no easy task when he undertook to thrill these seasoned adventurers. After this prologue, which leads one to expect a banquet of horrors, only a very brief fragment of the story is forthcoming. Though he gently derides Lady Ratcliffe’s literary tastes, Scott, too, was an admirer of Mrs. Radcliffe’s novels, and had been so entranced by Burger’s Lenore that he attempted an English version.[111] It was after hearing Taylor’s translation of this ballad read