The same person who
had clapped his thrilling hands at the
first representation
of the Tempest.—MACAULAY.
[Sidenote: That.]
I rubbed on some of
the same ointment that was given me at my
first arrival.—SWIFT.
[Sidenote: Which.]
For the same sound is
in my ears
Which in those
days I heard.—WORDSWORTH.
With the same minuteness
which her predecessor had exhibited,
she passed the lamp
over her face and person.—SCOTT.
V. MISUSE OF RELATIVE PRONOUNS.
[Sidenote: Anacoluthic use of which.]
418. There is now and then found in the pages of literature a construction which imitates the Latin, but which is usually carefully avoided. It is a use of the relative which so as to make an anacoluthon, or lack of proper connection between the clauses; for example,—
Which, if I had
resolved to go on with, I might as well have
staid at home.—DEFOE
Which if he attempted
to do, Mr. Billings vowed that he would
follow him to Jerusalem.—THACKERAY.
We know not the incantation
of the heart that would wake
them;—which
if they once heard, they would start up to meet us
in the power of long
ago.—RUSKIN.
He delivered the letter,
which when Mr. Thornhill had read, he
said that all submission
was now too late.—GOLDSMITH.
But still the house
affairs would draw her thence;
Which ever as
she could with haste dispatch,
She’d come again.—SHAKESPEARE.
As the sentences stand, which really has no office in the sentence: it should be changed to a demonstrative or a personal pronoun, and this be placed in the proper clause.
Exercise.—Rewrite the above five sentences so as to make the proper grammatical connection in each.
[Sidenote: And who, and which, etc.]
419. There is another kind of expression which slips into the lines of even standard authors, but which is always regarded as an oversight and a blemish.
The following sentence affords an example: “The rich are now engaged in distributing what remains among the poorer sort, and who are now thrown upon their compassion.” The trouble is that such conjunctions as and, but, or, etc., should connect expressions of the same kind: and who makes us look for a preceding who, but none is expressed. There are three ways to remedy the sentence quoted: thus, (1) “Among those who are poor, and who are now,” etc.; (2) “Among the poorer sort, who are now thrown,” etc.; (3) “Among the poorer sort, now thrown upon their,” etc. That is,—
[Sidenote: Direction for rewriting.]