Why does he affect you unpleasantly? Because he
is tedious, and therefore disagreeable, and because
his politeness is not real politeness. You know
the man who is awkward, shy, clumsy, but who, nevertheless,
impresses you with a sense of dignity and force.
Why? Because mingled with that awkwardness and
so forth
is dignity. You know the blunt,
rough fellow whom you instinctively guess to be affectionate—because
there is “something in his tone” or “something
in his eyes.” In every instance the demeanour,
while perhaps seeming to be contrary to the character,
is really in accord with it. The demeanour never
contradicts the character. It is one part of the
character that contradicts another part of the character.
For, after all, the blunt man
is blunt, and
the awkward man
is awkward, and these characteristics
are defects. The demeanour merely expresses them.
The two men would be better if, while conserving their
good qualities, they had the superficial attributes
of smoothness and agreeableness possessed by the gentleman
who is unpleasant to you. And as regards this
latter, it is not his superficial attributes which
are unpleasant to you; but his other qualities.
In the end the character is shown in the demeanour;
and the demeanour is a consequence of the character
and resembles the character. So with style and
matter. You may argue that the blunt, rough man’s
demeanour is unfair to his tenderness. I do not
think so. For his churlishness is really very
trying and painful, even to the man’s wife, though
a moment’s tenderness will make her and you
forget it. The man really is churlish, and much
more often than he is tender. His demeanour is
merely just to his character. So, when a writer
annoys you for ten pages and then enchants you for
ten lines, you must not explode against his style.
You must not say that his style won’t let his
matter “come out.” You must remember
the churlish, tender man. The more you reflect,
the more clearly you will see that faults and excellences
of style are faults and excellences of matter itself.
One of the most striking illustrations of this neglected
truth is Thomas Carlyle. How often has it been
said that Carlyle’s matter is marred by the
harshness and the eccentricities of his style?
But Carlyle’s matter is harsh and eccentric
to precisely the same degree as his style is harsh
and eccentric. Carlyle was harsh and eccentric.
His behaviour was frequently ridiculous, if it were
not abominable. His judgments were often extremely
bizarre. When you read one of Carlyle’s
fierce diatribes, you say to yourself: “This
is splendid. The man’s enthusiasm for justice
and truth is glorious.” But you also say:
“He is a little unjust and a little untruthful.
He goes too far. He lashes too hard.”
These things are not the style; they are the matter.
And when, as in his greatest moments, he is emotional
and restrained at once, you say: “This
is the real Carlyle.” Kindly notice how