with its hands and is silent. If your piece were
printed, I have no doubt it would be popular, for people
like to fancy that they feel much better than the
trouble of feeling. I would put all poets on
oath whether they have striven to say everything they
possibly could think of, or to leave out all they could
not help saying. In your own case, my worthy
young friend, what you have written is merely a deliberate
exercise, the gymnastic of sentiment. For your
excellent maternal relative is still alive, and is
to take tea with me this evening, D.V. Beware
of simulated feeling; it is hypocrisy’s first
cousin; it is especially dangerous to a preacher; for
he who says one day, “Go to, let me seem to
be pathetic,” may be nearer than he thinks to
saying, “Go to, let me seem to be virtuous, or
earnest, or under sorrow for sin.” Depend
upon it, Sappho loved her verses more sincerely than
she did Phaon, and Petrarch his sonnets better than
Laura, who was indeed but his poetical stalking-horse.
After you shall have once heard that muffled rattle
of clods on the coffin-lid of an irreparable loss,
you will grow acquainted with a pathos that will make
all elegies hateful. When I was of your age,
I also for a time mistook my desire to write verses
for an authentic call of my nature in that direction.
But one day as I was going forth for a walk, with
my head full of an “Elegy on the Death of Flirtilla,”
and vainly groping after a rhyme for lily that
should not be silly or chilly, I saw
my eldest boy Homer busy over the rain-water hogshead,
in that childish experiment at parthenogenesis, the
changing a horse-hair into a water-snake. All
immersion of six weeks showed no change in the obstinate
filament. Here was a stroke of unintended sarcasm.
Had I not been doing in my study precisely what my
boy was doing out of doors? Had my thoughts any
more chance of coming to life by being submerged in
rhyme than his hair by soaking in water? I burned
my elegy and took a course of Edwards on the Will.
People do not make poetry; it is made out of them
by a process for which I do not find myself fitted.
Nevertheless, the writing of verses is a good rhetorical
exercitation, as teaching us what to shun most carefully
in prose. For prose bewitched is like window-glass
with bubbles in it, distorting what it should show
with pellucid veracity.’
It is unwise to insist on doctrinal points as vital to religion. The Bread of Life is wholesome and sufficing in itself, but gulped down with these kickshaws cooked up by theologians, it is apt to produce an indigestion, nay, eyen at last an incurable dyspepsia of scepticism.