There has been a tendency to exaggerate the merits of this plot. Cowley shows, indeed, some skill in the ravelling and in the handling of individual scenes, but in the unravelling he is far from happy, and there is often an utter lack of motive about his characters. Where the whole construction, indeed, depends upon no inner necessity, the various threads, as soon as their interweaving ceases to be necessary to the plot, fall apart of themselves, without any denoument, strictly speaking, at all. Thus Cowley’s play has the characteristic faults of immature work, absence of rational characterization, and want of logical construction.
The verse, though well sustained, is on a singularly tedious level of mediocrity, while the lyrics introduced are all alike considerably below the general level. There are seldom more than a few lines together which possess any distinguishing merit, such as an indulgent editor has found in Bellula’s exclamation when she first falls in love with Callidora:
How red his cheekes are! so
our garden apples
Looke on that side where the
hot Sun salutes them; (I. ii.)
or in the lines with which Callidora prepares to meet death from her brother’s sword:
As sick men doe their beds,
so have I yet
Injoy’d my selfe, with
little rest, much trouble:
I have beene made the Ball
of Love and Fortune,
And am almost worne out with
often playing;
And therefore I would entertaine
my death
As some good friend whose
comming I expected. (V. iii.)