Example V.—“The Last Leaf."
1.
“I saw | him once |
before
As he pass |-ed by | the
door,
And
again
The pave |-ment stones | resound
As he tot |-ters o’er
| the ground
With
his cane.
2.
They say | that in | his prime,
Ere the prun |-ing knife
of Time
Cut
him down,
Not a bet |-ter man | was
found
By the cri |-er on | his round
Through
the town.
3.
But now | he walks | the streets,
And he looks | at all | he
meets
So
forlorn;
And he shakes | his fee |-ble
head,
That it seems | as if | he
said,
They
are gone.
4.
The mos |-sy mar |-bles rest
On the lips | that he | has
press’d
In
their bloom;
And the names | he lov’d
| to hear
Have been carv’d | for
man |-y a year
On
the tomb.
5.
My grand |-mamma | has said,—
Poor old La |-dy! she | is
dead
Long
ago,—
That he had | a Ro |-man nose,
And his cheek | was like |
a rose
In
the snow.
6.
But now | his nose | is thin,
And it rests | upon | his
chin
Like
a staff;
And a crook | is in | his
back
And a mel |-anchol |-y crack
In
his laugh.
7.
I know | it is | a sin
For me [thus] | to sit | and
grin
At
him here;
But the old | three-cor |-ner’d
hat,
And the breech |-es, and |
all that,
Are
so queer!
8.
And if I | should live | to
be
The last leaf | upon | the
tree
In
the spring,—
Let them smile, | as I | do
now,
At the old | forsak |-en bough
Where
I cling.”
OLIVER
W. HOLMES: The Pioneer, 1843, p. 108.
OBSERVATIONS.
OBS. 1.—Composite verse, especially if the lines be short, is peculiarly liable to uncertainty, and diversity of scansion; and that which does not always abide by one chosen order of quantities, can scarcely be found agreeable; it must be more apt to puzzle than to please the reader. The eight stanzas of this last example, have eight lines of iambic trimeter; and, since seven times in eight, this metre holds the first place in the stanza, it is a double fault, that one such line seems strayed from its proper position. It would be better to prefix the word Now to the fourth line, and to mend the forty-third thus:—
“And should | I live | to be”—
The trissyllabic feet of this piece, as I scan it, are numerous; being the sixteen short lines of monometer, and the twenty-four initial feet of the lines of seven syllables. Every one of the forty—(except the thirty-sixth, “The last leaf”—) begins with a monosyllable which may be varied in quantity; so that, with stress laid on this monosyllable, the foot becomes an amphimac; without such stress, an anapest.