cease to persecute her; and if you ask by what right
I do so, I reply that I am in fact your elder brother,
that I have saved our father from ruin, that I am
henceforth the predominant partner in his business,
and that, if you do not behave yourself, I shall see
that your allowance is withdrawn, and that you have
no longer the means to lead an idle and dissolute
life.” This would have been an ungracious
but not unnatural way of going about the business.
Had Augier chosen it, we should have had no right
to complain on the score of probability; but it would
have been evident to the least imaginative that he
had left the specifically dramatic opportunities of
the scene entirely undeveloped. Let us now see
what he actually did. Marie Letellier, compromised
by Leopold’s conduct, has left the Fourchambault
house and taken refuge with
Mme. Bernard.
Bernard loves her devotedly, but does not dream that
she can see anything in his uncouth personality, and
imagines that she loves Leopold. Accordingly,
he determines that Leopold shall marry her, and tells
him so. Leopold scoffs at the idea; Bernard insists;
and little by little the conflict rises to a tone
of personal altercation. At last Leopold says
something slighting of Mile. Letellier, and Bernard—who,
be it noted, has begun with no intention of revealing
the kinship between them—loses his self-control
and cries, “Ah, there speaks the blood of the
man who slandered a woman in order to prevent his son
from keeping his word to her. I recognize in
you your grandfather, who was a miserable calumniator.”
“Repeat that word!” says Leopold.
Bernard does so, and the other strikes him across
the face with his glove. For a perceptible interval
Bernard struggles with his rage in silence, and then:
“It is well for you,” he cries, “that
you are my brother!”
We need not follow the scene in the sentimental turning
which it then takes, whereby it comes about, of course,
that Bernard, not Leopold, marries Mile. Letellier.
The point is that Augier has justified Sarcey’s
confidence by making the scene thoroughly and specifically
dramatic; in other words, by charging it with emotion,
and working up the tension to a very high pitch.
And Sarcey was no doubt right in holding that this
was what the whole audience instinctively expected,
and that they would have been more or less consciously
disappointed had the author baulked their expectation.
An instructive example of the failure to “make”
a dramatically obligatory scene may be found in Agatha
by Mrs. Humphry Ward and Mr. Louis Parker. Agatha
is believed to be the child of Sir Richard and Lady
Fancourt; but at a given point she learns that a gentleman
whom she has known all her life as “Cousin Ralph”
is in reality her father. She has a middle-aged
suitor, Colonel Ford, whom she is very willing to marry;
but at the end of the second act she refuses him,
because she shrinks from the idea, on the one hand,
of concealing the truth from him, on the other hand,