[Variant 18:
1845.
But see aloft the subtle sunbeams
shine,
On withered briars that o’er
the crags recline;
Thus beautiful! as if the
sight displayed,
By its own sparkling foam
that small cascade;
Inverted shrubs, with moss
of gloomy green
Cling from the rocks, with
pale wood-weeds between. C.
Inverted shrubs with pale
wood weeds between
Cling from the moss-grown
rocks, a darksome green,
Save where aloft the subtle
sunbeams shine
And its own twilight softens
the whole scene.
And sparkling as it foams
a small cascade
Illumines from within the
impervious shade
Below, right in the vista
of the brook,
Where antique roots, etc.
Ms.]
[Variant 19:
1845.
Sole light admitted here,
a small cascade,
Illumes with sparkling foam
the impervious shade; 1820.]
[Variant 20:
1827.
... path ... 1793.]
[Variant 21:
1845.
Whence hangs, in the cool
shade, the listless swain
Lingering behind his disappearing
wain. 1820.]
[Variant 22:
1845.
—Sweet rill, ... 1793.]
[Variant 23:
1820.
... and ... 1793.]
[Variant 24:
1845.
And desert ... 1793]
[Variant 25:
1820.
How pleasant, as the yellowing
sun declines,
And with long rays and shades
the landscape shines;
To mark the birches’
stems all golden light,
That lit the dark slant woods
with silvery white!
The willow’s weeping
trees, that twinkling hoar,
Glanc’d oft upturn’d
along the breezy shore,
Low bending o’er the
colour’d water, fold
Their moveless boughs and
leaves like threads of gold;
The skiffs with naked masts
at anchor laid,
Before the boat-house peeping
thro’ the shade;
Th’ unwearied glance
of woodman’s echo’d stroke;
And curling from the trees
the cottage smoke.
Their pannier’d
train ... 1793.]
[Variant 26:
1845.
... zephyrs ... 1820.]
[Variant 27: This stanza was added in the edition of 1820.]
[Variant 28:
1845.
This couplet was added in 1845.]
[Variant 29:
1845.
And now the universal tides
repose,
And, brightly blue, the burnished
mirror glows, 1820.]
[Variant 30:
1845.
The sails are dropped, the
poplar’s foliage sleeps,
And insects clothe, like dust,
the glassy deeps.
This couplet followed l. 127 from 1820 to 1843.]
[Variant 31: